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Edwin is -at least- as sexy as Assistant.

Nice work. Your lipsynching has improved drastically, partially due to the excellent new mouth set you're using. Pacing is also greatly improved, though there is still some room for improvement.

I really like this series, it keeps a nice middleground on the Sliding Scale of Silliness vs Seriousness. Never too much of either, but still consistently funny when it trys to be. I'm also liking your artstyle which is simple enough that the animation doesn't seem cluttered or dirty but still has the texture layer to keep it from looking too plain.

Sensing some trust issues between Edwin and Assistant brewing, and Trevor being painfully 'I told you so, can't trust people' about it. Ah, and props to GJKickballs for the opening song. Cracks me up. ;p

Keep it up.

Kieran-s responds:

Hey thanks! I'm glad you like the mixture of seriousness and silliness, Its something I need to be careful about.

Pointless

You could at least make something that shows what you can achieve comparatively to CS3 or older, instead of just using two new features really quickly and not giving any indication of what you can achieve with them. Also Flash is now owned by Adobe. Also it does it exist.
Personally I prefer CS3. Sure CS4 looks nice, the bone tool is really neat, and I was much looking forward to utilising it, but sadly that, along with everything else that's new, insists on using AS3, which confuses the hell out of me for the time being. With time I might get used to it, but for now CS3 serves my purposes just fine.
I could go on for a bit but that'd be a waste of both our time. Put effort into your next flash. I'd be sincerely surprised if this took more than 5 minutes to make.

ConradB responds:

CS4 ROX U HHAVE BAD TASTE IN FLASH

A place to start from

I'd like to say this was interesting, but sadly it was all very much the same all the way through. He turns, shoots a guy, the scene changes, he shoots a bunch more guys. It's not particularly bad, but a little more variety would be nice. The close up scenes were well drawn and kept me watching. Also, make sure to compress your music and sound files, this flash could have been much much smaller than 6.5 mb. It might be more interesting if there was more variety in bad guys as well, or perhaps he could find another gun. It is of course up to you, but try to make more happen, whether it's a longer animation or not. Hopefully you find this useful and not offensive. I think you can do better, but this wasn't too bad. I think this certainly deserves to get through, but only if you're prepared to make time to improve your style. Good luck.

FEAR25X responds:

ty :) at first i was just trying to make it almost like a run n' gun video game, but now there is a back story so in the next episode there will be more to it :) and it was in 2 parts but i just pasted frames together and tried to clean up the long white screens the best i could so the file size was a bit big :/ sorry

Brilliant

Nicely done. Simplistic but fun to watch. I loved the part where the button went into the block...was not expecting that. ^^ I'm expecting plenty more animations from you! Keep it up.

-h4h-

Krizy responds:

Ohh!! Thankz alot!!11!11!1!!!

That was a nice review =)

What happened?

Splurgle...it pains me to say so but, this was really bad. What happened? The animation in this was abhorrent! The previous installments were getting better and better and with this one it just collapsed in on itself! The blood was sub-standard and the character movement was all jittery and jerky. And the feet kept going backwards and forwards! And the action wasn't...you know...actiony! I'm glad you're redoing it but just pull yourself together man! Bring back the Splurgle we know and love! Oh, and I'm looking out for your side-project! ^^

>h4h<
-don't die on us!

Splurgle responds:

=] Thank you for caring so much and thank you for realizing what a train wreck this was. Don't worry, I hope to make the remade version a lot better.

That was awsome ^ ^

Wow. I wish my first animation was as cool as that. I like the way he sort of glides along. Fantastic first try, keep 'em coming. Perhaps develop the physics of his movement a little more when hes jumping through the air and make the landscape just a little more smooth and fluid (the brush strokes). I feel strangely "happy" watching this animation, no not that kind of happy, the innocent kind. The music is also perfect for the animation. Good job.

-h4h-

xbutton responds:

thank you very much

Definitely the best of the four so far...

Much much better. You're animation has improved ten-fold, good work. Only one few minor issue, the tweened blood in the slow-mo segment looked awful (soz><). And finally, he got hurt! Thats one of the things I find most irritating about most hack 'n' slash flashes, the go through 80 guys without taking a single hit. Nice work, looking forward to seeing more.

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Splurgle responds:

The tweened blood was awful, I agree. But the reason behind it was that it was sort of complicated making an fbf slow-mo blood splatter. So I just decided to shape tween it. Thanks for the review!

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